Me loves it and you knows it
I belive you've heard enough from me about this but I am really happy you
finished and as I said it was well worth the work ^^
What can I say about this........it's just great.
I would have liked the blues on the purse to be repeated somewhere and the
little guy in the BG to stand out a bit more - not like the chara but
something.... Yeah but this is just me trying not to make a fool of myself and
leave a hopefully useful comment.
This is just toooo much........
Every single molecule that is girlie in me is sqeeling in delight. This looks
like something that I would have liked all my notebooks to have on the cover ,
back when I used them . This should be turned into a sticker or put in a
t-shirt. I love it!
This is so detailed so my compliments for patiente and the overall
composition.
Well........as always I'm gonna play bad and start with the critique.
If you would not have wrote that it's done with 5 different pencils I could have
swore it was only one and not higher then 2B. Why? Because the shadeing looks
flat to me - it lacks contrast. Your stongest shade here is the one on the
material draped over her arm- and it ain't dark enough. My advice would be to go
and concider that the darkest shades should be : the underside of the umbrella,
the hair ( since it's a dark colour ) and the material folds.
Hope it is helpful. I thought I should write this since this is a doujin worthy
of serious critique. Keep it up with the good work:)
This is very beautiful. I think the best achievement for you in this one would
be the face. The exppresion is wonderfully done - just priceless.
I would like to encourage you to use more contrast in shadeing and different
intensities in your lines. Also , I have no ideea how this looks in the artbook
but the halo looks like a plate to me
Overall I really like it and I think you did a great job.
Thank you so much, it's amazeing how you knew to do an alechino doujin without
me ever telling you how much I love that manga and the art.
THANKS A LOT!
you drew them all so inviting - reaching out with their hands and all. I'm
starting to see a pattern in your male chara...hehehe. As in the other doujin my
only objection would be with the bg.
Yay.......now I know what colour his hair is. I love green, all shades of green.
I think i would have liked it more with a different bg but I like the way you
"cropped" him from the rest .
I am so envious of you sometimes for the way you feel and apply contrast effects
in your woks. It makes them so eyecatching.
She is beautiful and seeing that she's your original you should be proud of her.
However I find her elbow too high.
Unfortunatelly I don't know the original chara but I love your technique as
always.
I am sorry for the late comment and I'll try to answer your Pm today as always
if I get the time.
Sorry for the late comment
Oricum... eu una nu cred ca sunt prea scurte picioarele pentru ca daca te uiti
bine linia taliei e destul de sus. Imi plac foarte mult culorile dar nu cred ca
o avantajeaza fondul, e cam vibrat si distage atentia de la model.
Nice design!
Ahhhhhhhh! ........How could you do this to me? Do you have any ideea
*drooling....what effect 5 cute guys in one pic can have on a girl?
Hehehe, anyway, it's a really nice pic , as Anjhi-kun said, wonderful work on
their facial expressions, nicely chosen poses for all of them.
Still there is something bothering me with the overall chromatics of
it........but since I can't pinpoint it this comment is useless.
Great job!
Actually I find your style quite beautiful and I belive that the way it sets you
appart from the rest of us makes it even better.
The roundish face doesn't make him seem less male to me just younger.
You can tell that the hand was edited because it looks a little weird but it's
deffenetely better then with the middle finger.
Also I think the colour of his hair goes really well with the tones of his skin
but I don't quite like the color of the shirt ( it just bugs me in an
unexplicable way )
Anyway , great job!
Me loves it and you knows it
I belive you've heard enough from me about this but I am really happy you finished and as I said it was well worth the work ^^
What can I say about this........it's just great.
I would have liked the blues on the purse to be repeated somewhere and the little guy in the BG to stand out a bit more - not like the chara but something.... Yeah but this is just me trying not to make a fool of myself and leave a hopefully useful comment.
He looks really cool Mira-chan ! I had no ideea you could do such amazeing vectors , he is really great
This is just toooo much........
Every single molecule that is girlie in me is sqeeling in delight. This looks like something that I would have liked all my notebooks to have on the cover , back when I used them . This should be turned into a sticker or put in a t-shirt. I love it!
This is beyond words........you have no ideea how happy you've made me by shareing this......
Ohh my , this is the first time I hear about this book and the art looks so good. Thank you so much for shareing it ^^
This is so detailed so my compliments for patiente and the overall composition.
Well........as always I'm gonna play bad and start with the critique.
If you would not have wrote that it's done with 5 different pencils I could have swore it was only one and not higher then 2B. Why? Because the shadeing looks flat to me - it lacks contrast. Your stongest shade here is the one on the material draped over her arm- and it ain't dark enough. My advice would be to go and concider that the darkest shades should be : the underside of the umbrella, the hair ( since it's a dark colour ) and the material folds.
Hope it is helpful. I thought I should write this since this is a doujin worthy of serious critique. Keep it up with the good work:)
This is very beautiful. I think the best achievement for you in this one would be the face. The exppresion is wonderfully done - just priceless.
I would like to encourage you to use more contrast in shadeing and different intensities in your lines. Also , I have no ideea how this looks in the artbook but the halo looks like a plate to me
Overall I really like it and I think you did a great job.
Thank you so much, it's amazeing how you knew to do an alechino doujin without me ever telling you how much I love that manga and the art.
THANKS A LOT!
I loved the scan from the first time I saw it and I love what you did from it as always. I can't stop beeing amazed by your skill ^^
You should like your drawing sweety. It's beautiful !
you drew them all so inviting - reaching out with their hands and all. I'm starting to see a pattern in your male chara...hehehe. As in the other doujin my only objection would be with the bg.
I think i'm in love! now what more could I say....
Yay.......now I know what colour his hair is. I love green, all shades of green.
I think i would have liked it more with a different bg but I like the way you "cropped" him from the rest .
Really nice shadeing in this one and such an alureing expression ^^
I am so envious of you sometimes for the way you feel and apply contrast effects in your woks. It makes them so eyecatching.
She is beautiful and seeing that she's your original you should be proud of her. However I find her elbow too high.
Awwwwww
I think it's so sweet. As Kyo said it's a really nice surprise to see something coloured from you .
Beautiful gift!
Unfortunatelly I don't know the original chara but I love your technique as always.
I am sorry for the late comment and I'll try to answer your Pm today as always if I get the time.
This is beautiful, very angsty and dinamic.
Sorry for the late comment
Oricum... eu una nu cred ca sunt prea scurte picioarele pentru ca daca te uiti bine linia taliei e destul de sus. Imi plac foarte mult culorile dar nu cred ca o avantajeaza fondul, e cam vibrat si distage atentia de la model.
Nice design!
Ahhhhhhhh! ........How could you do this to me? Do you have any ideea *drooling....what effect 5 cute guys in one pic can have on a girl?
Hehehe, anyway, it's a really nice pic , as Anjhi-kun said, wonderful work on their facial expressions, nicely chosen poses for all of them.
Still there is something bothering me with the overall chromatics of it........but since I can't pinpoint it this comment is useless.
Great job!
OHHHHHHHH ....... I am distaught for you. I have a cat and he's my baby. You made me cry and this is so beautiful. Jeeeezzzz.......I'll stop now.
Actually I find your style quite beautiful and I belive that the way it sets you appart from the rest of us makes it even better.
)
The roundish face doesn't make him seem less male to me just younger.
You can tell that the hand was edited because it looks a little weird but it's deffenetely better then with the middle finger.
Also I think the colour of his hair goes really well with the tones of his skin but I don't quite like the color of the shirt ( it just bugs me in an unexplicable way
Anyway , great job!
It is really cute and the gray tones are well balanced makeing a very pleasent end result.
BRAVO , tres bien!